One problem I have with this photo is the glare over her eyebrow. I can’t fix it properly in Lightroom and I don’t know Photoshop well enough (yet) to be able to deal with it there. I’ve asked a friend to help me on the retouching.
In the meantime, one way to deal with that glare is to eliminate the eyes altogether – as beautiful as they are. I think this works quite well, though obviously a very different mood from the original.